tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2901417228038250015.post3307632778936925028..comments2015-07-06T15:49:45.169-04:00Comments on Paper Cuts and Ink Stains: NaPoWriMo (7/30)CMR Prindlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07194158528550295417noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2901417228038250015.post-66791945441973248022013-04-07T18:33:06.929-04:002013-04-07T18:33:06.929-04:00I agree, also it feels a bit like the speaker is m...I agree, also it feels a bit like the speaker is meditating alone, not really speaking to anyone but just thinking and feeling these things.. Sort of like when you stare at a sunset and just.. feel. And form memories.Kerridwenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07114162167451828767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2901417228038250015.post-86982997343884571872013-04-07T18:14:04.477-04:002013-04-07T18:14:04.477-04:00I especially like your last stanza and how it all ...I especially like your last stanza and how it all comes down to that quiet "please". I think the lack of punctuation serves the poem well -- it's a very open ending, almost like a prayer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com